Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
WHAT WORKS:
Good concept, entertaining paper. This is an informative paper, and I agree with pretty much everything they say.
WHAT DOESN’T WORK:
Work on your grammar and sentence structure. A few more interviews would be good as well. Organize the paragraphs a bit more. Also, you should have a bit more information on why certain things keep people awake.
QUESTIONS:
What keeps people awake? How commonly do people nap?
Philip On said,
March 27, 2008 at 9:25 am
WHAT WORKS?
It makes napping sound very appealing?
Informative
WHAT DOESN’T WORK?
Awkward sentence format?
QUESTIONS?
Can you show us perspective from more people that nap daily?
121amc said,
March 27, 2008 at 9:27 am
Notes for Peer’s Oral Response
Essay # _2___
Writer ______Lourdes Alexis________ Peer Respondent _____Adrienne Chemel_________
Instructions: Listen to the essay carefully. Take at least two minutes after the reading to complete the following notes, and then share your reactions orally with the writer. Submit the completed form to your teacher at the end of the Peer Response activity.
WHAT WORKS:
Good concept, entertaining paper. This is an informative paper, and I agree with pretty much everything they say.
WHAT DOESN’T WORK:
Work on your grammar and sentence structure. A few more interviews would be good as well. Organize the paragraphs a bit more. Also, you should have a bit more information on why certain things keep people awake.
QUESTIONS:
What keeps people awake? How commonly do people nap?